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В честь Дня всех влюблённых решили вспомнить про first-sight сцены.

Написать такую - непростой, но важный навык для любого сценариста. Ведь если в вашей истории есть любовная линия (а куда без неё?), то в какой то момент там появится сцена где между двумя героями возникает ЧУВСТВО. Передать его, эти эмоции - задача со звёздочкой. Одно из самых ярких и удачных решений в истории кино (по мнению Авторской) - в сцене из фильма "Ромео и Джульета" База Лурмана.

Вот как она выглядела в сценарии:

INT. BATHROOM. NIGHT.

As the music swells, Romeo watches a moustached catfish
glide past a medieval castle.

Suddenly, Romeo pulls away. Peering back at him through the
castle is a pair of exquisitely beautiful angelic eyes.

The Diva's first pure, achingly beautiful notes soar.

Confused, Romeo looks again. There is no mistake - it is a
girl. Through a shimmering curtain of ribbon weed, two dark
wide eyes, a childish nose and sumptuous full lips.

Romeo pushes his face closer to the glass. The other face
snaps abruptly away.

INT. POWDER ROOM. NIGHT.

CUT TO: Juliet, dressed as an angel, on the other side of
the tank. We now realise that the girls' powder room and
the boys' bathroom are divided by this watery wonder world.

Juliet warily moves closer to the glass.

INT. BATHROOM. NIGHT.

Romeo leans his face against the glass. The love ballad
builds.

SLOW TRACK: From Romeo's profile, in through the water, and...

INT. POWDER ROOM. NIGHT.

...out the other side, to find Juliet in profile, peering
into the tank.

INT. BATHROOM. NIGHT.

Romeo presses his nose lightly against the glass.

INT. POWDER ROOM. NIGHT.

Juliet; a tiny smile.

А вот - как в фильме.

А какие подобные сцены навсегда остались в ваших сердечках?

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В честь Дня всех влюблённых решили вспомнить про first-sight сцены.

Написать такую - непростой, но важный навык для любого сценариста. Ведь если в вашей истории есть любовная линия (а куда без неё?), то в какой то момент там появится сцена где между двумя героями возникает ЧУВСТВО. Передать его, эти эмоции - задача со звёздочкой. Одно из самых ярких и удачных решений в истории кино (по мнению Авторской) - в сцене из фильма "Ромео и Джульета" База Лурмана.

Вот как она выглядела в сценарии:

INT. BATHROOM. NIGHT.

As the music swells, Romeo watches a moustached catfish
glide past a medieval castle.

Suddenly, Romeo pulls away. Peering back at him through the
castle is a pair of exquisitely beautiful angelic eyes.

The Diva's first pure, achingly beautiful notes soar.

Confused, Romeo looks again. There is no mistake - it is a
girl. Through a shimmering curtain of ribbon weed, two dark
wide eyes, a childish nose and sumptuous full lips.

Romeo pushes his face closer to the glass. The other face
snaps abruptly away.

INT. POWDER ROOM. NIGHT.

CUT TO: Juliet, dressed as an angel, on the other side of
the tank. We now realise that the girls' powder room and
the boys' bathroom are divided by this watery wonder world.

Juliet warily moves closer to the glass.

INT. BATHROOM. NIGHT.

Romeo leans his face against the glass. The love ballad
builds.

SLOW TRACK: From Romeo's profile, in through the water, and...

INT. POWDER ROOM. NIGHT.

...out the other side, to find Juliet in profile, peering
into the tank.

INT. BATHROOM. NIGHT.

Romeo presses his nose lightly against the glass.

INT. POWDER ROOM. NIGHT.

Juliet; a tiny smile.

А вот - как в фильме.

А какие подобные сцены навсегда остались в ваших сердечках?

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