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Дорогие мои, делюсь продолжением моей истории и прошу вашей помощи. 🙏🙏🙏

Ответьте, пожалуйста, на 2 вопроса:

🔸️Плавно ли звучит текст, нет ли разрыва в повествовании?

🔸️Насколько гармоничны описания окрестностей, номера, моря итд:

- вполне погружает в атмосферу
- слишком много, затянуто (и где именно?)
- нужно добавить, не хватило (и чего именно?)

Буду рада узнать ваши впечатления и пожелания.🥰🥰🥰

Приятного чтения 🤗

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ПРОДОЛЖЕНИЕ РОМАНА!!!
НАЧАЛО ЗДЕСЬ

Дорогие мои, делюсь продолжением моей истории и прошу вашей помощи. 🙏🙏🙏

Ответьте, пожалуйста, на 2 вопроса:

🔸️Плавно ли звучит текст, нет ли разрыва в повествовании?

🔸️Насколько гармоничны описания окрестностей, номера, моря итд:

- вполне погружает в атмосферу
- слишком много, затянуто (и где именно?)
- нужно добавить, не хватило (и чего именно?)

Буду рада узнать ваши впечатления и пожелания.🥰🥰🥰

Приятного чтения 🤗

#пишукнигу
👇👇👇

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